WATERLOO, Iowa—Since the final presidential debate, John Kerry has traveled around the country delivering a series of speeches that his campaign calls his “closing argument.” The topics vary, but the theme is always the same, the “Fresh Start for America”: Friday in Milwaukee, a “fresh start” for jobs; Monday in Tampa, a “fresh start” for health care; Tuesday in Wilkes-Barre, Pa., a “fresh start” for fiscal responsibility and Social Security. The speeches are supposed to convince Americans of Kerry’s fitness for the presidency, but a side effect has been to demonstrate how inept he is at delivering prepared remarks.
The campaign gives reporters the text of each of Kerry’s speeches “as prepared for delivery,” apparently to show how much Kerry diverges from them. During his stump speeches and town halls, Kerry makes the occasional Bush-style error, such as the time I saw him tell a blind man in St. Louis that he would “look you in the eye.” Tuesday night in Dayton, Ohio, Kerry tried to thank teachers for spending money out of their own pockets on students, but instead it came out as a thank-you to Mary Kay Letourneau as he said, “And they’re putting out for our kids.” His pronunciation of “idear” grates on my ears far more than Bush’s “nucular.” But the authentic Kerryism emerges only when he gives a formal address.
Kerry proves incapable of reading simple declarative sentences. He inserts dependent clauses and prepositional phrases until every sentence is a watery mess. Kerry couldn’t read a Dick and Jane book to schoolchildren without transforming its sentences into complex run-ons worthy of David Foster Wallace. Kerry’s speechwriters routinely insert the line “We can bring back that mighty dream,” near the conclusion of his speeches, presumably as an echo of Ted Kennedy’s Shrum-penned “the dream will never die” speech from the 1980 Democratic convention. Kerry saps the line of its power. Here’s his version from Monday’s speech in Tampa: “We can bring back the mighty dream of this country, that’s what’s at stake in these next two weeks.”
Kerry flubs his punch lines, sprinkles in irrelevant anecdotes, and talks himself into holes that he has trouble improvising his way out of. He steps on his applause lines by uttering them prematurely, and then when they roll up on his TelePrompTer later, he’s forced to pirouette and throat-clear until he figures out how not to repeat himself. He piles adjective upon adjective until it’s like listening to a speech delivered by Roget.
Kerry’s health-care speech Monday in Tampa was a classic of the form. The written text contained a little more than 2,500 words. By the time he was finished, Kerry had spoken nearly 5,300 words—not including his introductory remarks and thank-yous to local politicians—more than doubling the verbiage. Pity his speechwriters when you read the highlights below. It’s not their fault.
Kerry’s Script: Most of all, I will always level with the American people.
Actual Kerry: Most of all, my fellow Americans, I pledge to you that I will always level with the American people, because it’s only by leveling and telling the truth that you build the legitimacy and gain the consent of the people who ultimately we are accountable to. I will level with the American people.
Kerry’s Script: I will work with Republicans and Democrats on this health care plan, and we will pass it.
Actual Kerry: I will work with Republicans and Democrats across the aisle, openly, not with an ideological, driven, fixed, rigid concept, but much like Franklin Roosevelt said, I don’t care whether a good idea is a Republican idea or a Democrat idea. I just care whether or not it’s gonna work for Americans and help make our country stronger. And we will pass this bill. I’ll tell you a little bit about it in a minute, and I’ll tell you why we’ll pass it, because it’s different from anything we’ve ever done before, despite what the Republicans want to try to tell you.
Kerry’s Script: These worries are real, and they’re happening all across America.
Actual Kerry: These worries are real. They’re not made up. These stories aren’t something that’s part of a Democrat plan or a Republican plan. These are American stories. These are the stories of American citizens. And it’s not just individual citizens who are feeling the pressure of health care costs. It’s businesses across America. It’s CEOs all across America. This is an American problem.
Kerry’s Script: That’s wrong, and we have to change it.
Actual Kerry: Well, that’s wrong, my friends. We shouldn’t be just hoping and praying. We need leadership that acts and responds and leads and makes things happen.
Kerry’s Script: That’s wrong, and we have to change it.
Actual Kerry: Well, that’s wrong. We had a chance to change it in the Congress of the United States. They chose otherwise. And I’ll talk about that in a minute.
Kerry’s Script: It’s wrong to make it illegal for Medicare to negotiate with the drug companies for lower prices.
Actual Kerry: But not satisfied to hold onto the drug company’s profit there, they went further. Medicare belongs to you. Medicare is paid by the taxpayer. Medicare is a taxpayer-funded program to keep seniors out of poverty. And we want to lower the cost to seniors, right? It’s common sense. But when given the opportunity to do that, this president made it illegal for Medicare to do what the VA does, which is go out and bulk purchase drugs so we could lower the taxpayers’ bill and lower the cost to seniors. It is wrong to make it illegal to lower the cost of tax and lower the cost to seniors.
Kerry’s Script: And if there was any doubt before, his response to the shortage of flu vaccines put it to rest.
Actual Kerry: Now, if you had any doubts at all about anything that I’ve just said to you, anybody who’s listening can go to johnkerry.com or you can go to other independent sources and you can track down the truth of what I’ve just said. But if you had any doubts about it at all, his response to the shortage of the flu vaccine ought to put them all to rest.
Kerry’s Script: I believe we need a fresh start on health care in America. I believe we need a President who will fight for the great middle class and those struggling to join it. And with your help, I will be that kind of President.
Actual Kerry: I believe so deeply—and as I go around, Bob and Bill and I were talking about this coming over here from other places—that the hope that we’re seeing in the eyes of our fellow Americans, folks like you who have come here today who know what’s at stake in this race. This isn’t about Democrat and Republican or ideology. This is about solving problems, real problems that make our country strong and help build community and take care of other human beings. I believe we need a fresh start on health care in America. I believe we need a President who’s going to fight for the great middle class and those who really are struggling, even below minimum wage now. And they won’t even raise it. With your help, ladies and gentlemen, I intend to be that kind of President who stands up and fights for the people who need the help.
Kerry’s Script: Families will be able to choose from dozens of different private insurance plans.
Actual Kerry: Now George Bush is trying to scare America. And he’s running around telling everybody—I saw this ad the other night. I said, “What is that about? That’s not my plan. That may be some 20 years ago they pulled out of the old thing.” But here’s what they do, they are trying to tell you that there is some big government deal. Ladies and gentlemen, we choose. I happen to choose Blue Cross/Blue Shield. I could choose Kaiser. I could choose Pilgrim. I could choose Phelan. I could choose any number of different choices. That’s what we get. And we look through all the different choices and make our choice. You ought to have that same choice. The government doesn’t tell what you to do. The government doesn’t run it. It gives you the choice.
Kerry’s Script: Ladies and Gentlemen, here’s the Bush Health Care Plan: Don’t get a flu shot, don’t import less-expensive drugs, don’t negotiate for lower prices, and most of all, don’t get sick.
Actual Kerry: So, Ladies and Gentlemen, if you had doubts about it at all, here’s the Bush Health Care Plan: Don’t get a flu shot, don’t import less-expensive drugs from Canada, don’t negotiate for lower prices on prescription drugs. And don’t get sick. Just pray, stand up and hope, wait—whatever. We are all left wondering and hoping. That’s it.